Written work seems to be show understanding of visual images, there are clear personal responses along with general analysis, maybe when there are large areas of text bullet point the main points at the end of the paragraph just for quick future reference just to help you identify if its that paragraph or that piece of text you need to read through.
Some large paragraphs present which may be better off bullet pointed but having said that it was still understandable, as it had been written clear and concisely.
Writing is in a clear and concise tone, which is structured via correct headings and sections. Overall easy and enjoyable to read.
ReplyDeleteWritten work seems to be show understanding of visual images, there are clear personal responses along with general analysis, maybe when there are large areas of text bullet point the main points at the end of the paragraph just for quick future reference just to help you identify if its that paragraph or that piece of text you need to read through.
ReplyDeleteSome large paragraphs present which may be better off bullet pointed but having said that it was still understandable, as it had been written clear and concisely.
ReplyDeleteUnderstandable, but as above - could be a lot better if bullet points are used.
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